Monday, November 12, 2007

News on the Feature Story

Good morning everyone. I hope all of you are enjoying your day off... I've been talking to Mrs. Moreno and in an effort to simplify, we are not going to require that the feature stories be completed. Those of you who turned in a first draft will get some form of extra credit. I don't know how it is going to be counted yet.



Should you decide to continue on with this piece and revise it, I think it will make a good portfolio addition.



We can schedule an appointment if you would like to revise.



Enjoy the rest of your day. See you in school tomorrow.



Ms. S

2 comments:

Jonathan P said...

Trip Hw

On today's trip, I learned many interesting things on web safety. I never thought of the internet really as dangerous until I went on this trip today. I learned that even with the slightest bit of information, child abductors could come looking for you. It is important to NEVER give away any personal information to a person that you do not know or have never seen before. If you do, there is a high chance that you will eventually regret it.
Internet safety is a very important thing. I am glad that I do not have a Facebook or MySpace, because those things are what can give away some of your personal information. Anyone could be a child predator, which is why it is important to know how to avoid them.
1) Never give away any of your personal information. (i.e. Phone #, Address, etc.)
2) Never agree to meet your online "pal", because you just might end up getting abducted.
3) Make sure you tell a parent or guardian about this person that you have been chatting to if that person says anything "wierd" or "unusual".
4) This "online pal" usually pretends to like what you like and have your interests. They seem really nice and that is what lures kids in and suddenly hook, line, sinker, abduction.
Watch out for online predators, they will stop at nothing to try to harm you. "Be wise. Be wise. Don't trust who you don't know"
Sorry I posted this here, I didn;t know where to put it.

Anthony Drew said...

I remembered to do the feature arcticle on teenagers. I got the information from my cousin.