Some tips on what to avoid while writing essays...
Never start an essay with:
"I'm going to tell you about..."
"In this essay I will be writing about..."
"This essay will be about..."
Never finish a paragraph with...
"... and that was about..."
"and this is why I told you about this"
Never conclude an essay with...
"In conclusion..."
"Now I will finish my essay with..."
Anyway you get the point... We will be working on this in class next week.
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in elementary school i always finished an essay with "in conclusion" because there wasnt really anything i could think of to finish it off.
oh yeah this is the hw for 10/17/07 just saying.
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